*cackles* Excellent page! :D

posted by Kirlaskia on 1st Jul 2007

In panel one, it's pretty funny to see Yuffie's huge, bright eyes juxtaposed with Vincent's face in deep shadow.

posted by andygoth on 1st Jul 2007

so....is Vince saying, Don't put your life on the line like that... or is he chastising her... or... I CAN'T READ DEEPLY! that last phrase throws me off, for real. its like... 'don't make things harder for yourself just to get a prize'
BTW apparently the Ribbon is the ULTIMATE accessory in FF12

posted by AdamZero (Guest) on 1st Jul 2007

As we discussed in the last page or two, Yuffie risked everybody's life to get a ribbon from the tonberry. She already has "waaaay too many," in her own words.

posted by andygoth on 1st Jul 2007

Wow, pannel four gave me chills...and I never get chills. Vincent's eyes looked like they bore straight through her. And what's with the purple under their eyes? Dark circles?

posted by Casseh Valentine (Guest) on 1st Jul 2007

Wow, Vinnie's hair looks extra beautiful on this page, especially in panel 2.

posted by Coco (Guest) on 1st Jul 2007

I'm just impressed that Yuffie isn't still scared. If I went face-to-face with a Vincent that pissed? Terrified. Beautiful art, by the way.

posted by Midaki (Guest) on 1st Jul 2007

Vincent does look scary. >.<;; This page is good, considering everything that transpires here has to be conveyed through just heads and facial expressions. ^___^;;

Yuffie looks awesome in the incentive. I love her dress!!

posted by Neph (Guest) on 1st Jul 2007

Excellent incentive! (they always are!)

:D

posted by Kirlaskia on 2nd Jul 2007

Vincent looks cool on this page. Fourth pannel gives me chill's. Nice work! ;3

posted by Lucrecia92 (Guest) on 2nd Jul 2007

Hum...TWC.net won't let me register my abitual username. I wonder why? I'll try to fix this. In the meantime, know I'm eagerly waiting for chapter 6. But I hope Yuffie will have a more normal expression by then, this one scares me ._.

posted by KoShiatar on 2nd Jul 2007

I think Vincent is way too emo to throw a punch out of anger. I mean, look at what he did when Hojo took his entire life and everything he loved. Did he march right into Shinra headquarters and land one on the freaky proffessor? Nope, he sulked and moped in a coffin for years. Bet he was listening to My Chemical Romance the whole time too... :P

Getting to the point, I know "that look". It's an attack without attacking done by those with no intention to harm, but with every intention to hurt. I do it all the time.

Secondly, hand-to-hand combat isn't something I'd imagine Vincent being fond of... apart from in his transformed forms, of course. Striking something just isn't Vincent. It didn't suit him in Dirge of Cerberus, and it doesn't suit him now. He was always the cold, lone gunman.

Kind of a waste of his super strength really. If I had super-human powers I'd probably weild a cleaver-blade, not unlike a flat-ended version of Cloud's Buster Sword, and if I had Vincent's emotional issues, by the gods I'd damn well put every ounce of hate behind every blow I made. I mean, how much steam is it possible to let off pulling a trigger?

On another note, when are Yuffie and Vincent going to stop beating about the bush and just do it?

posted by Valentine on 2nd Jul 2007

Haha, perhaps Vincent isn't giving her an 'attacking' look, but rather frustrated Hojo didn't give him x-ray vision too. :P

posted by Kirlaskia on 2nd Jul 2007

... Or cleverly hidden storyine? vincent seems to know that the tonberries are where her ribbons are coming from even through in 247 he's never seen a master tonberry before. Yet here he seems to know that that's where ribbons come from.

But that's actually not the one that I first came up with, but a tnagent my mind came across here's the real kicker: if, as noted, Yuffie has "wwwwaaaaaaaayyy too many ribbons," then why is she trying to morph and create more of them?

posted by Freelance (Guest) on 3rd Jul 2007

I believe that's because Yuffie is, as you can see in the previous pages, slowly losing her mind because of the mako in the crater. She's not fighting for Materia growth anymore, but just for fight's sake, and she's started disregarding even the most basical rules of carefulness because of that.
Mako poisoning is not only physical, it also mental, as we can see in the game when Cloud falls in the Lifestream.

posted by KoShiatar on 3rd Jul 2007

Hey guys! Yuffie isn't morphing the Tonberry because she needs more ribbons, she's fighting the Tonberry because she wants more ribbons, which is a difference.

Also, you can morph any Tonberry into a ribbon, not just the master ones. Vincent has seen Tonberries before, he's just never seen Holy-mutated Master ones like this type.

Those of you wondering where the heck the "romance" in this "romance" is hiding, will either be pleased, or greatly displeased, by Chapter 6, which will focus mostly on Vincent and Yuffie's relationship. No, I haven't forgotten about Nanaki. ;-)

posted by *Enkida (Guest) on 3rd Jul 2007

Shh, Enkida! Don't give it away. The novel's main pull was the will-they-won't-they thoughts I had running through my mind. Not knowing is the best bit.

posted by Valentine on 5th Jul 2007

It's just one of those moments when you're stumped & left pondering what to do next. And this moment left Vincent & Yuffie at a strained circumstance...

posted by M - SyxX (Guest) on 7th Jul 2007