Oh man... you mentioned Vincent owning a "vampiric" gun. Prepare for a bombardment of "Vincent-is-not-a-vampire!".

As for the comic, I love it. Yuffie is really feeling like she should be in control and it is just killing her that Vince will not give in. The expressions are priceless.

As for incentives? Anything Nanaki is great in my opinion. I might like to see an incentive not only with Nanaki and Seto, but with Nanaki's mother as well and perhaps even Bugenhagen.

posted by Kuba (Guest) on 3rd Oct 2006

she is so a miranda

posted by warlife on 3rd Oct 2006

i'd like to see you do a fanart of your favourite online comic as an incentive - just out of curiousity.

posted by cooledskin (Guest) on 3rd Oct 2006

*stares at Vincent* Huh, wha? Oh, yeah. Yuffie is mean to Vincent. D=

I want to see Squall with a penguin. It's odd, but I think that as an incentive would rock.

posted by Akunen on 3rd Oct 2006

Pouty look! You cannot resist the pouty look, Vincent. You might as well give up now. :p

posted by bluefish (Guest) on 3rd Oct 2006

The way this page is done is just amazing. You have all those nonverbal communications and subtle expression changes so wonderfully worked in; I love it.

And I had no idea the Death Penalty got stronger by whacking more things. That's kind of dumb...but cool at the same time. It got some serious ups in DoC.

As for an incentive request, Cid! Cid! Cid! The last one you did of him was hilarious, but compositionally very good too. You really got the scruffiness of him; most people draw him too bishie. Cid, please!!! Pleeeeease! I'll draw something for you ~_^.

posted by klepto-maniac0 (Guest) on 3rd Oct 2006

Excellent! I LOVE vincent in ...EVERY panel! :D And Yuffie's expression in the last... mwhahaha excellent!

Hmm, I suppose requesting a perverted cid/yuffie/vincent incentive would be out of the question? O.o Hmm, wouldn't mind seeing a Seymour(ffx)/Yuffie, perhaps kissing? embracing? something. hehe :P

posted by Kirlaskia on 3rd Oct 2006

you really did a good job getting the emotions and feelings across so far in this comic book. Keep up the good work!

posted by saharasfury on 3rd Oct 2006

Im a long time reader, first time commenter, and I have to say that your drawings have gotten way better since i first started reading. Yuffie is such a childish pain sometimes, but i guess that's why i love the brat. And that row with Yuffie going from that "may I please have it" look to the "give me the gun or I KILL YOU" look, reminds me of how she acted in the game. For an incentive, i want to see the advent childrens Tifa (loves my sexy Tifa).

posted by Darrin (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

Wee, nice expression in these panels. ^_^

Hm.. I find Tseng and Reno are good incentives.. as is Sephy

posted by Rose (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

Very nice page! ^-^

As for incentives, maybe...Vincent and Yuffie playing a videogame together, and Vincent is winning by a mile? XD

posted by Stormy (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

As an incentive, Maybe Vincent getting really close to yuffies face! lke he's just looking deep into her eyes and yuffie freaking out blush red! ohh dang so many possibilities!

LOVE your comic! I have been reading since day 1 >:D

posted by Naoko (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

heh i love her expression in the 3rd pannel

posted by doom Bubbles on 4th Oct 2006

Gotta be the most awkard...and yet, hilarious scene by far ^__^

posted by M - SyxX (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

I love your comic i try to catch it when it comes out. The artwork is awesome. So I just wanted to thank you for making a great comic. Oh as for an incentive i don't know maybe some of the crew from FF8? I don't see to many of them arround on the web as much as 7 and i think you would do an awesome job of them. Anyway just wanted to say "good job!" Oh and Vincent is looking great as well. I didn't like him all that much till i started to read your comic now i love him.

posted by Demetria Sena (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

Hey, this is coming along great! It's been a while since I last commented, I know (feel free to throw something sharp in my general direction or you know, at me) but I figured I'd stop being so mean so here I am...

Death Penalty is a... Er... nevermind.

I also started reading your newest story, FFX something I can't remember the name of. ^^; I'm going to review for all those chapters soon so... >.> Yeah

I wonder why I did decide to leave you a comment? I'm taking up all your valuable space!

I agree with someone on the incentives however... Cid! I know you want to. ;)

Anyways, great job and I'm still reading. <33

See you round ff.net and the like.

Tish~

posted by Tishannia (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

I have been reading aroudn here for a while and i love your art style i realy do I love the plot as well your also using my most beloved characters from FFVII so I just have to say id like to see a picture of Yuffie, Vincent, and Nanaki in battle stance ready to kill something. hopefully with there best weapons.
~Thanks for listening~
Phantom-XI

posted by Phantom-XI (Guest) on 4th Oct 2006

Heh, fantastic as usual.

As for incentives, how about...Yuffie giving Barrett a ninja-wedgie.

Or just casting 'All Creation', whichever's easier.

posted by Twin on 5th Oct 2006

Wow great as usual. As for incentives i think Sephy has been used a little too much. Reno's always good for a laugh.
However i think a few more awkward moments between Yuffie and Vincent would work. It's funny watching Yuffie blush, yet it would be even funnier watching Vincent blush *giggles*

posted by Ancestral Spirit (Guest) on 5th Oct 2006

During the funny moments, could you maybe draw the characters in chibi look? That would certainly add more comic relief -- Mad props 2 ya!!

posted by M - SyxX (Guest) on 5th Oct 2006

*gasp* I heard the word Reno! 8runs around in circles* WHERE IS HE WHERE IS HE?!!
Reno: *hiding in the closet*

posted by Reno's Stalker on 5th Jan 2007